I wrote two pieces back in January after I saw Star Wars: The Force Awakens, so this is old news. I thought I'd post them to this blog because they fit the theme of the blog and I also need time to write some new stuff. I'll post the second piece tomorrow or in a few days.
Star Wars The Force Awakens
Please don't think that this is running anyone down. If you liked it, that's great. But, to me it's like brushing different types of face hair on portraits of George Washington in effort to make him more interesting. And I have nothing against all fan fiction. I enjoyed Maleficent, Dark Shadows, The 10th Kingdom, and The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen. It can be well done, when some thought and care are put into it. I adore satire - Spaceballs is one of my favorites! Right up there with Airplane! and Galaxy Quest. I just needed more from this since it was meant to continue so closely with something that I grew up with and has taken years of work and has been inspirational to me personally.
There are so many things that didn't
make sense in this movie. I'll start with the minor inconsistencies and plot
holes:
Why does Luke have a metal arm? His
prosthetic was perfect in Ep. 5 and even if he lost it again between here and
there, the prosthetic technology would only keep improving, which was the whole
point of Anakin's metal arm in Ep.2.
I'm also having a hard time
understanding what the point was of a map to Luke's location. It wasn't
pertinent to anything in the movie. Luke and Leia could always find each other
(Ep. 5) and feel each other (Ep. 6) intuitively... Luke would know if the need
was desperate. And he wouldn't ditch her or anyone. Also, did they think nobody
would notice that while everyone was standing around R2 talking about and
looking at the map piece from BB8 that he remained powered down, but then
sprung back to life at the end for no apparent reason when all urgency in the
matter was gone? And then there's the who... either someone knew where Luke was
to make the map or Luke put out the map itself. Neither option makes sense and
especially when you consider the timeline problem.
What timeline problem, you ask?
First, it's a very weak supposition that Luke would run off into hiding because
of one Jedi being seduced by the dark side given the history of the previous
three movies (Eps. 4, 5, and 6.) When Yoda and Obi Wan went into exile, it was
because the Sith had taken over and engineered a mass genocide of Jedi... now
that's a good reason to retreat and flee. But, back to Luke and the timeline...
the story in this movie is that he was training a new group of Jedi... well,
where are they all? We only see Kylo and logically, he would have to have been
at least a young teenager before he could comprehend enough to be lured away.
Yet they talk about Luke like he's been gone for decades and about the Force
and the Jedi like it's a fairy tale. Even Luke didn't have that kind of
reaction when Obi Wan first told him that he'd been a Jedi Knight. I'll grant
you, he should've been a little more surprised on hearing that his father was
one, since Owen and Beru never told him, but the point is that the notion of
the Jedi as the former peacekeepers of the galaxy was recent history in the
time Ep.4 took place. It didn't mean much to him way out on Tatooine and he
probably only half paid attention to history or current events like most young
people, but it wasn't the stuff of legends. I'm friended to at least two
Vietnam vets on my Facebook who can give me detailed accounts of that war and
we're further removed from Vietnam than this movie is from the events of Ep. 6.
It doesn't make sense that everyone's forgotten it already.
Including Han... By the way, why was he
still a smuggler? At the end of Ep. 6 he was presumably married to a former
diplomat and military leader. He was a field commissioned general and had
access to political clout. He could've gone back to Tatooine and started
cleaning it up and overturning the Hutt dynasty since he was so personally
wrapped up in that mess. Some vague notion of marital trouble isn't good
enough. As much as I rip on soap operas, I actually have a great respect for
good, solid soap writing. And this is an example of bad soap opera writing...
break up the super couple for no good reason. It's predictable and shoddy. And
why was Leia still leading ground troops at her age when she should have been
an ambassador or senator? More on that later; I'm getting ahead of myself -
hold that thought.
Why was Kylo wearing a mask? The
Sith were all hooded, but only Vader got the mask cuz he was burned. The answer
that many would give is: well it's in homage to his grandfather who he wants to
emulate. Exactly what is he going to emulate? Vader became Anakin again at the
end of Ep. 6. His soul was redeemed, he fulfilled the prophecy of destroying
the Sith, he saved his son's life and he got to join in with the good Force
ghosts. It's not a story that Luke would leave out when training new Jedi.
Vader wasn't really working on anything except perhaps on how to bring Padme
back from the dead. Ultimately, he was just the Emperor's puppet. What work was
Kylo trying to finish? Perhaps it's a story they'd been planning for the next
installment, but I can't help but feel it would be just as weak and vapid as
the new Luke story.
I loved the idea of a rogue storm
trooper. That was my favorite part of seeing the trailers. I wanted to love
this character. But as it went on, it made less and less sense too. He's the
only one to go against his programming... or really it should've been referred
to as brainwashing, since the troopers were no longer clones. (That's the only
part of the movie that did make sense since the clones would have eventually
been too old to serve as soldiers.) They weren't programmed clones, so there should
have been more problems than just this one guy. The only one out of all those
storm troopers. It's also very dodgy because of the presence of so many storm
troopers in this movie. I have a point to make about that later on as well.
Bear with me.
Finally, Ray (Rey? Rae?)... Who was
that girl from Ann of Green Gables who kept one-upping the boys at every turn?
A couple times is cool. Over and over and over and over and it gets really old,
really fast. And I can't seriously entertain any viewpoints about the other
movies not having strong female characters just because there were no female Jedi
who were in the foreground of the story. If being world leaders, senators, and
commanding military Forces isn't strong enough for a female character, then
some people can be pleased by nothing. And I know I'm not the only one who
thought it was really lame that within two hours of learning that the Force flows
within her, she's already proficient enough use several Force tricks and duel
to a draw with a guy that is supposedly half Luke-trained and half
Sith-trained. Not even the chosen one who was conceived with the Midichlorians
could do that. It completely negates the idea of having to train a new group of
Jedi and tears down the concept of a Jedi Counsel in the prequels, or Luke
needing Yoda's guidance in the original set. Who needs Luke, anyway?
There's been some complaint of Kylo
being a whiner, but that's not really an issue. Luke was whiny at first and
Anakin did a lot of whining. What's more problematic is that General Hux was a
whiny little kid too. In fact there were no adults in this film apart from Leia
and Snoke. (Han was always a big kid in a lovable way. That was his
character.) I've heard the argument that the magic of the original films was
for kids and that's what people should take from this film... But even in the
original set the bad guys were adult enough to be menacing and charming. The
elder good guys were self controlled and patient like a parent.
This movie was
like a satire of the original set because, let's be bare-bones honest here:
This movie is a shallow remake of Episode IV with bits of 5 and 6 thrown in.
Jakku is Tatooine, Snoke is the Emporer, Kylo is Vader, Maz is Yoda, Hux is
Grand Moff Tarkin, Starkiller Base was the Death Star... Need I go on? There
wasn't an original thought, character, or even planet or technology in the
whole mix.
The other 6 films had a lot of depth and complexity. I simply find
it insulting. It's like people set unattainably high standards for the prequels
and had no standards at all for this. I've looked at different message boards
and I'm honestly stupefied by the people who think this is the greatest thing
ever; better than the prequels. Yes, the original set was more simplified and
action-based than the prequels, but that's because they were started when Lucas
was a nobody with no money.
From my point of view there was so
much potential and so many good ideas wasted and squandered. I'll give you my
examples now. First you have to remember that the story of the Jedi was
actually secondary to the political intrigue of the galaxy far, far away. Let's
return to the timeline for a moment, beginning with the prequels: There's a
peaceful Republic in the beginning and the Evil Forces slowly and
surreptitiously gain power over the course of the first three films. In the
next three, the Empire is in charge and the good guys are making a comeback...
starting as a small rebellion and building to a victorious reclamation of power
by the end of the third film. So, how was the First Order in charge of anything
with tons of military troops and another planet destroying weapon? They
couldn't even fully restore the Death Star between Eps. 4 and 6 when the Empire
was at the height of their power. Even if the good guys weren't fully in charge
at the end of Ep. 6 they would be by now (approx 30 years later) after taking
out the Emporer and Vader, effectively cutting the head off the snake. I
thought the First Order was a fine idea. But for it to really make sense in
connection with the other movies, it would have to back up a little. In the
scenario I picture, the Republic would be sorting itself out again. (Here, Leia
should be back in the political arena.) The
good guys would be in charge again, while the First Order would be a group of
terrorist cells trying to regain power. There would've been a split in the
storm troopers... some would've stayed on with the new government, some would
stay loyal to the defeated Empire. (You can glean a better rogue storm trooper
story out of this circumstance.) The attempt to re-form the Jedi Knights would
happen and we would see the highs and lows taking place within. We could find
out where this Snoke even came from, for crying out loud. (I was wondering
where he came from through the whole movie.) And we'd see him take a new
apprentice from the new Jedi order. And we've already seen how Anakin was
seduced by the dark side, so the new Sith would have different motivations.
This new Sith would not be Kylo. The father/son narrative was played out for 6
movies... it's just more bad, predictable soap writing... it's time to move on.
This set up would mean that Luke, Leia, and Han would have had to have had
bigger parts in this first installment, but in order to pass the torch fluidly
to the next generation it would've been necessary. Instead they just threw the
torch randomly and burned down the franchise. (I'm going on the assumption that
we're doing another trilogy here and not just making them into infinitum like
the X-Men and Avengers series.) Anyway after a more complex set up and some
actual character development (Snoke's story, Ray's story, Fin's story,) then
you can start writing out the older characters. If there was a need to kill one
off, it should've been Luke. It would've thrown the new Jedi order into panic
(who will lead the Jedi now?) and it would advance one of the younger
characters into that position of leadership. (Insert Kylo and/or Ray here.) His
death would serve a purpose in the whole of the story. Han's death served no
purpose. It was all done for shock value as a poor recreation of Obi Wan's
death for emotional manipulation. The destruction of Coruscant had no purpose.
Sure it was the "capitol" but it's also where they'd want to be when
they were in charge again... they're not from a different galaxy far, far away.
Kamino is a more obvious military target to prevent more cloning. Obi Wan's
death advanced Luke... The slaughter of the Jedi advanced the story of the Dark
Side being able to seize complete control. Do you see what I'm saying here? And
if you want more Luke he could always be brought back as a Force ghost.
Ultimately this set should be a slow build of the First Order gaining a quick
advantage by acquiring the new Sith pair and become a growing threat until the
climax in the 3rd installment when the Republic manages to pull together faster
than it had time for after the long years of the Empire (this is where new
planets/moons and technologies would be helpfully introduced to keep it new and
fresh) in order to defeat the last of the stragglers for good and restore Jedi
peacekeepers. The circle closes!
But, you say, they wanted to take it
in another direction... and why can't I just accept that? Well, I could accept
it if it truly went in a different direction instead of rehashing what's
already been done. Taking it in another direction would be another good idea
since the entirety of Star Wars was the story of Anakin Skywalker - it would
have to be a completely unique perspective. Say, it takes place in the distant
future with all the old characters long deceased... perhaps a Jedi civil war or
something. They could give a nod to the old set by having some of them be
descendants of the great Luke who re-formed the Jedi order once upon a time,
but it would unfold under a different set of galactic circumstances that have
nothing to do with the original story. Or it could take place in the distant
past - the story of Darth Plagueis that Palpatine told Anakin when they were at
the space opera in Ep. 3. Of course, that was no idle story; it was an
indicator of Palpatine's own story. But the idea of the story of an all
powerful Sith, or a story of the Sith in general (we know nothing of them,
other than they're evil) and what went on with them and the Jedi of old would
make a great story and have no direct bearing on the story to come. Although it
would be another prequel of sorts, it would still be fresh. Ingenuity required.
Thought required. Even the stories that they've written for the video games up
to this point had better movement, and they still used Vader as the main
antagonist.
Everything about this movie was too
much, too soon with no creativity or imagination and I don't understand how
people are so easily satisfied by such an empty special effects show. It must
be a sign of the times. In the wrestling business, it's what we call
"spot-fest".... a lot of crazy, wild moves with no purpose or story
to the match. To my Harry Potter fans, consider the Harry Potter series... did
you get to see the bank, the different common rooms, the ministry, the
hospital, the prison, the house of Black, the house of Gaunt, the Shrieking
Shack, and Hogsmeade all in the first book? No, it was a slow build, with a lot
of thought put into how every character introduction and death would advance
the underlying story. With Star Wars The Force Awakens, it's like they weren't
even trying. There is no underlying story because it was just a Jedi spot-fest.
It was lazy. I guess the assumption is that nobody cares about all the other
work put into building up the entire universe that had been created and all the
small details therein and that people just want a little drama with their light
show. The only thing new and different was a shiny Amazon storm trooper.
This has been a compilation of our
own observations as well as brilliant points of others we've seen on the
internet... points that are deleted from the threads of message boards, if
you're wondering why people like us are feeling slighted. But it's better this
way because we won't be wasting money on a DVD. As for any further
installments, we'll just watch from afar - examine spoilers; perhaps catch it
on a movie channel if it looks like they've fixed this mess. But, really, I
should've known from the way that Abrams turned the Star Trek franchise into a
fan-fic, remake machine, that something similar would happen here, so I have
only myself to blame.
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